Lily's Birth Day

    Alivia Lin

    Grade 2 Narrative Writing

    Mt Waverley Junior Campus Sunday

     

     

    Lily’s Birthday

    Today was Lily the cat’s birthday.  Her friends went to buy her a gift.  Then a little letter came in front of Lily.  It said, “Wish you a horrible birthday.”  Lily felt unhappy.

     

    Suddenly, a grey dragon ate Lily.  She screamed as loudly as she could.  Her friends heard her.  They went running to her.

     

    The dragon swallowed Lily.  It was too late, until the witch appeared.  The witch took Lily out from the dragon.  Then the witch disappeared.

     

    The witch took a nap.  Lily’s friends tip-toed to rescue Lily and they did!  They ran back to the party.

     

    Then Lily enjoyed her birthday after all.

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